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Alex is a Pirate - Edge of the World 05 [better]

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PREVIOUS "ALEX IS A PIRATE" PAGES: eviltomp.deviantart.com/galler…

PHEW! That was annoying... but I think this version is MUCH better than the one I posted previously. You can see the nowhere-as-good version here:
* eviltomp.deviantart.com/art/Al…

I'm also going to try to experiment with NOT using a brush pen for line weight variance and stick with a single line weight throughout. This comes at a great time, because my brush pen ran out of ink! But also... in my journey to learn more about inking techniques, I've been going over a lot of my graphic novels and being more conscious of how they ink. Recently I rediscovered my copy of not simple by Natsume Ono, and noticed that she was still able to create dynamic characters even if the art style was simple and drawn with a single line width:
* i19.photobucket.com/albums/b17…

To which, I'm gonna try to study this book a bit more and see what lessons I can take from it! :)
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Much better than the first version. :) I love how much you improved with this style.
Moar comics plz.